Is my song good? Titled "Your all gone"?

I think it's great. Depends on how your going to sing it and what the instrumental is. Maybe clean up some of the lyrics like "Upon me saddness dawns" and "'Cause of you I'm all out of glee" because no one wants to hear those little obvious amateur rhymes. The rest is spectacular especially the verses. The chorus is going to be the thing people remember most of all, so make it catchy and fun (well not really but you know what I mean)